If you get one thing, what will you ask for?

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Sorry in advance.
Some words may be used incorrectly and are difficult to understand.

Character 1: ' __ '
Character 2: " __ "
Character 3: "' __ '"



As if everything had ended.
On the day that I knew.
Both of my eyes couldn't see any more.

At the patient's room
' Let's break up. '
' You should go and find someone better than me. '
' Someone who can take care of you. '
SLAM! (Door closing sound.)
... Goodbye, my last love.
I need to let you go.
It would have been better if you could be with someone who was more dependent than blind man.
I can't take care of anyone.
I can't take care of myself.
To be honest, I am now.
I didn't see the path to move on.
I should have ... died since then.

At Outside the patient building
I'm on a wheelchair
This winter is a little cooler this year.
Nurses often take me out every day.
The worst thing is that they didn't speak to me at all.
They may follow doctor's orders.
He might be worried about my mental health.
Time passes day after day.
Day after day.
I still don't dare to walk in the dark.
Like being alone on earth.

At the bench under the tree
Until a voice spoke to me.
"' You're the fifth building patient that the young nurses talk about a lot. '"
' talk about a lot ? '
"' You are very popular. '"
' Very Popular ? I think I was more hated. '
' Like all the nurses who brought me here, no one spoke to me. '
"' Nurse ? '"
"' The person who takes you out for the wind every day isn't a nurse. '"
"' But she seems to be your boyfriend. '"
"' Why don't you talk to him ? '"
" I "
" I ... I was angry, I was very angry with him. "
" Until I can't say anything "
" I was angry that he was chasing me for someone else. "
" I was angry that he insulted my love for him. "
" No one who loves each other has left each other in difficult times. "
' You... '
' I'm sorry, I want you to have a good life. '
I'm afraid to walk forward in a dark world.
' Be with me, you must be in a lot of trouble. '
But now I am starting to see the light in my heart.
' But'
' I'm very glad '
Because it is dark so you can feel the light.
' Thank you very much '
Because it is cold so you can feel the warmth.
' I love you '
" I knew "
We both cried and hugged at the same time.



May the reader find a lasting love, until death separates you.
 
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I think your story is great, but there are still some things to improve
 
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using hack with at least a month to be mmber here
 
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they are kinda called quotes or quotation marks (or maybe apostrophe)
But it is a good short story after all
 
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I'm kinda like that story.... actually love it though..
 
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hey good read liked the story

but to answer this
I'd say I'd like to have a really wealthy client for my job
a client with a lot of connection for multiple client too

and one who could also be my friend haha
 
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