Normal life.

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Sorry in advance
Some words may be used incorrectly and are difficult to understand.


One

Happiness and sorrows are like ice cream.
When in your hand It started to melt away.
Although taste will be different. But the same Is that they all happen, exist and disappear.


Two

Same cup of coffee May have different flavors Depends on the drinker.
But no matter how different.
Every cup was poured, drank and gone.


Three

When the sound is still loud and strong Some love You may not be able to see.
Until the sound started to fade away Decreased stamina.
If it still exists, then that love may have been clearer.


Please share your feelings.
 
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The grammar is a bit messy, but the words are well put together. You can also work a bit on the rhymes and then done, you can be a poet.
 
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well that was wholesome
 
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would love to see more. this made me laugh XD
would like to see more of your poems
 
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